Thursday, May 14, 2009

The look - fiction 55

Across the room, he saw her, wildly, as if seeing her for the last
time. Startled, she looked back at him, as if for the first time. Then
they wheeled her to the operation theater. As the glass doors shut, he
turned away from his reflection, violently, as if never wanting to see
himself again.

8 comments:

Amal Bose said...

really touching work..

Vinnie said...

wow...i wanna know more..pehle kya hua tha?? will she die?? what was he guilty of?

veluSr said...

So much packed in so little!
Awsome !!
One of the best of many many more as yet to come !!!

M & P

veluSr said...
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Rushabhh Gandhi said...

Touching !

Ms.R. said...

That's tocuhing. Honestly I got goosebumps just thinking about the situation. :) I'm following your blog Captain. Thanks for dropping a word at mine. :)

Ashwathy said...

yikes! scarily true!
too close for comfort.. becoz i've been there, done that... on the lines of the 'he'. well-written! :-)

Velu said...

Thanks all for commenting.

Ms R : Thanks for following. Am following you too.

Ashwati : Thanks. Liked your 55's too.

Cheers,
Velu